This week I received some valuable feedback on my project so far. The logomark is not only a C, representing the brand name “Commune” but also a bird’s eye view of a person in a hugging pose. One piece of feedback I got was that although the off-centre position of the circle is clearly meant to represent the person’s head, the off-centre positioning is not as aesthetically pleasing as it would be if it was centred, so I will amend this going forward. I also chose the colours of green and blue to represent environmental friendliness and community, which the class picked up on positively. The idea was also received positively, as a solution to a real problem that exists even now, and its innovation in using future technology to tackle the problem.